Over the past few weeks I was given three students' blogs to visit and comment on some of their work. They were Blake S. in Mrs. Lombard's class, Caro in Mr. Webbauro's class, and Andony in Mr. Gardener's class. To begin, upon visiting Blake S' blog I found that he had written a post that was summarizing "Lemonade Wars", a recent story that he had read. It was a very well written post and I applauded him for his great writing and how organized his post was in summarizing the story. Caro was my next student. In his post he discussed how he and a few of his friends had recently competed in "Weet-Bix", which apparently is a triathlon which takes place in New Zealand. I thought that was so exciting! He explained how he had the easiest time riding his bike and he encourages everyone to try it once. Last, I had Andony. He only had one post on his site and it was a poem he had written that described the 5 senses. He wrote about a motorcycle and used to senses to illustrate different ways that the bike could be seen. It was a very simple poem, consisting of only 5 lines, but had no errors in spelling or grammar.
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